Audience feedback on magazine draft

After creating the first draft of the movie magazine product, I asked different people who fit in my target audience for the film product itself, whether or not they had any improvements or suggestions that could be made to the cover. I sent out the cover and asked for any improvements and received some good feedback, that I will be taking forward to now go back and further improve my magazine cover.

Movie Magazine Draft 1

here is the first draft of my movie magazine. I used a range of magazine concepts within, so that it would fit the conventions of a professional movie magazine. The magazine is titled 'feature' which links to 'feature film,' and I used different examples of real products to help not only the magazine look more professional, but also my film product itself. I am now going to get audience feedback on this first draft and make further improvements to the cover.

I already made

Movie Billboard Drafts

Here are my to billboard drafts that I created on Sketch. both follow the same theme but feature the different main characters within. I am now going to get audience feedback on which on I should take forward, and whether or not certain things can be improved on the chosen one.

Second Draft

media draft 1

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0LfEQp4rrHM

Photos #1 for print products

For the print products aspect of the project, I have started to take a range of pictures of the three main characters for the poster and magazine cover. I will use these pictures for the print products that I will be designing to advertise Happening Upon Luna. In the future more pictures will be taken of Luna and Tessa together, and some individual shots of each character.

Movie magazine masthead design

Here are some pre existing movie magazine mastheads that I have researched before I go on to create my own masthead designs. Conventions of these mastheads are:

• Bold, large font
• One word titles
• Words to do with film or the film industry
• Red colour schemes or the colour red featuring somewhere on the title
• On three of the covers, the title covers the main image in the background, although one incorporates the person in the foreground.

Here I have created a few examples of a magazine masthead on sketch. These are just a basis before I get some peer feedback as to which one is the best style, and should be used on my magazine cover. I chose the word 'feature' to fit with the conventions of the above mastheads. Feature is a word for a film at length, so  it fits perfectly with the magazine content.